21/10/08
Tuesday, October 21, 2008
here comes the killer paper
death in 3 more hour...
haha~
oh yea.. just found out that OKTO channel got anime at night..
LOL
7.30PM got avatar.. monday to friday..
7.30PM AZUMANGA DAIOH.. saturday & sunday..
wednesday to friday 11pm-12am all got anime.. 6 different anime~
LOL!!!
ok lar..
tats all~
WEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KILLER PAPER DOWN!!
WOOOOOHOOOOO!
FOR PAPER 1 , I CHOSE A 1 WORD QUESTION.. 'GREED'
i think my story and content are not bad.. just that i hope not many gramer mistake..
my story goes like this..
The gate opened , i took a step into a cold and dim room , there was a table with two chair facing each other. sitting on the chair is a man so pale , so skinny and staring at me without facial expression
I cannot belief that this man was once my bestfriend who spent his whole day with me choosing birthday present for my mother , waiting for me at bus-stop when i was late , helped me to copy notes during school times when i was sick. and now he is sitting here.
Tom mother was a fine middle-aged lady who treat everyone and everthing kindly. but this changed when a sudden illness stroke her 6 years ago. now she is in the hospital wings , immoveable. Tom had 1 younger brother & 2 younger sister. this makes her the eldest of all children.Well , tom had not told me anything about his father since he passed away when tom was 6 and tom had little memories about him. all tom remembered is to attend the wake & funeral of his dearest father.
Tom had to do part time in different place after school, but soon after, he quitted school to feed his siblings and medical bill, the tregedy struck when tom's youngest brother was dianosed with the same illness his mother had. his brother was sent to the hospital but tom could not afford both medical bill. so he had to terminate his vegetable mother inorder to save his brother.
There was another choice. tom tried to gamble but its a failure, so he went to the tools shop to buy a knife, decided to rob old passerby. That night , he followed an old woman into a lift, but he could not gather enough courage so he walked out of the lift without robbing.
After that , tom decided to be a con-man by selling talisment to innocent old folk. This was a sucess career tom chose which he can pay medical bill and feed his sibling with ease. greed took over tom as he could not stop money from flowing in, so he continued to cheat old folk but was finally caught red-handed two weeks ago.
Now, looking at tom who is staring at me, i moved forward and pull the chair backward and take a sit. "How have you been? we are taking care of your family so rest assure." tears flow from tom's eye few second after he heard my words, crying, sobbing. This would be a different story if he seek for help from us...
well~ this is an idea of what i wrote.. i cant rewrite the whole story i wrote word by word.. but i feel the real story i wrote is much much shorter ( 516 words )and nicer with better flow.. because i can continue easily while writing just now.. but now i have the whole story constricting my flow -_- i can only stick in the part of story at about that part of the story..
nvm~ forget about my story~ HAHAA!!
section 2 - report writing.. 400+ words. i ended up inviting the principal to class outing XD hahah~ thats really convincing right XD
paper 2.. 1 mistake i noe already done..
summery 149 words.. haha~
ok lar.. not really confident.. but wont fail XD i think so.. hope so.
oh yea~ thx rui xian for sending me MMS just b4 my all of my paper just to wish me good luck =)
though the 1st 1 u send i thought is press wrong.. because i diden know that need to full view to see the whole picture.. if not only can see the top part of picture without the caption XD haha~ but still. how thoughtful of u =) thx thx XD
tats all~